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The mountain journey
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 07:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Not a cloud in the sky, a deepening blue
lights the skies about the mountains
crystal clear it's hue
The mountains of rock, are covered in snow
The sun casts it's shadow on the rocks below
Evergreen pine fills the landscape before me
Bare empty aspen, fill the valleys I can see
The Rocky mountain highland has become my shield
But also a prison, to the thoughts that I yield
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darkscorpio
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2006-11-13 19:20:03]
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Re: The mountain journey
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by purplestary on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 07:22:47 PM AEST
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| nice imagery. good write..liked it alot. the last two lines stick with the reader too. well done. |
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Re: The mountain journey
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by spiritwind on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:32:42 AM AEST
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There is a charm to this that is so peaceful.
Vivid details of beautiful mountains and thought.
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