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Don't feel down
Contributed by
Ivy
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Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
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There are things that would hurt,
for people might just blurt.
Say that you are bad,
which would make you all the more sad.
You have gone through so much,
Should take some time out and rest.
Don't hold your life like a clutch,
think of the future, iam sure it's gonna be the best.
Experiences are to treasure,
It might not be of pleasure.
It makes us grow in life,
Even if there is no one by our side.
Copyright ©
Ivy
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2003-02-17 15:20:00]
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Re: Don't feel down
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by Damien on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:31:45 PM AEST
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| That was the best poem anyone has written for me (not that anyone else has). As long as you are there by my side I don't think I would need anybody else. And you can bet I'll never feel down again. Thanks a million-Damien |
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Re: Don't feel down
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by Ivy on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 06:56:49 AM AEST
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That was one of your best poems I read. Goes on to show your depth in feelings and emotions.
Good write keep it up!!
Lots of love and luck.
Veena
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Re: Don't feel down
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by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:20:51 AM AEST
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| That was really nice. I liked it.. Inspiring shud say. Way to go Ivy!! |
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Re: Don't feel down
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by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 11:52:45 AM AEST
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| One of those Poem's I cud read when i'm feeling all upset. Great going!! Keep them coming Girl !! |
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