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Mohawk
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 10:59:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sometimes in that strange hazy place~
I've come to call the, "twilight realm"
Where the mind drifts off into space~
just before sleep by overwhelmed...
I know you again like I did~
when yesterday was still tomorrow
Where within each other we hid~
for a time that turned out borrowed...
And I remember every word~
even the few left unspoken
How by them our hearts had been stirred~
until the day by them broken...
Life after, "us" went on, of course~
in which more blood has been let
Still of some dreams you are the source~
because you, I've never regret...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
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2006-11-13 10:59:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mohawk
(User Rating: 1 ) by pooper on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 12:16:05 PM AEST (User
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Melancholy and revealing. Well done |
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Re: Mohawk
(User Rating: 1 ) by CuriousitysCat on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 05:54:58 PM AEST (User
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Yay for Mohawk, hmmm, but I would have to agree, I never really noticed this before but this poem is quite revealing, at least to me. Anywho you know my feelings about him and anything related... ;]
~JazzyJ |
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