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Identity
Contributed by
tearstained_soul
on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 11:15:18 PM in AEST
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You are holding my blood
in the depths of your heart
draining it from my veins
you were selfish from the start.
You are holding my heart
in the depths of your soul
ripping it from beneith my chest
you are killing me on your own.
You are holding my soul
in the layers of your skin
sucking it slowly through my eyes
your robbing me from within.
You are holding my skin
and stomping into the ground
ripping it from my bones
you now have my identity....
I cannot be found.
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tearstained_soul
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2006-11-12 23:15:18]
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Re: Identity
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 04:07:31 PM AEST
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this is very powerful!
i'm truely amazed!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Re: Identity
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 03:03:02 AM AEST
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that....is nothing short of amazing. very raw, i love it. seriously though, the anger....too awesome.
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