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I'm Sure
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 10:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I can't be sure that four
Is the sum of two and two
But one thing that I'm sure of
Is that I'm in love with you.
Other people told me things
That I'm supposed to know are true
But I'm the one who told me
That I'm so in love with you.
The answers to equations change
Based on what mathematicians do,
But nothing can ever have an effect
On the love I have for you.
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2006-11-12 22:58:17]
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Re: I'm Sure
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 11:20:56 PM AEST
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this poem is SO cute and seems pretty sincere! it was also DEFINATLY well qritten
fav stanza- "I can't be sure that four
Is the sum of two and two
But one thing that I'm sure of
Is that I'm in love with you."
Keep up the good work :)
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Re: I'm Sure
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 11:21:07 PM AEST
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Well, you pretty much had this reader with your author's note - I suspected I could guess where you were heading...
Ah, love - we can be mistaken so often, get it 'wrong' more often than we'd like to admit --- but when you really find it, there is no guessing, no need for confirmation, and no concern for what anyone else may think. No one can tell us, really, what it is - but it doesn't seem to matter... it really is unmistakable.
Yeah, you! I'm delighted by your certainty. : )
~Snemmy
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