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Waking Beauty
Contributed by
wizard
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 07:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Lying softly, dreaming of angels and roses,
The world around her teeming
In anticipation of her waking glow;
Awaiting another day of true love.
The moon reflects the sun’s euphoric grin
Until the wayside of dawn, waiting;
For soon her view will again be seen
And savored for yet another short eternity.
The day can not truly begin until her
Radiance is cast upon it,
Shrouding the sun in its feeble
Attempt to illuminate the land.
And when dawn breaks and flowers bloom,
Gardens shall beam with joy,
For the most precious flower that could ever
Be is present once again.
The trees’ rustling leaves are shaking
With delight, knowing she is near.
Howling winds scream her name,
And raindrops fall as the heavens cry tears of joy.
And mountains will surely peak with glee,
For now the hills are able to
Cast an eye upon her beauty grand,
And for a moment not be gazed upon…
For again, she has stolen the show.
Although when night returns
She'll again be at rest,
Her presence will pervade throughout
The sleeping day, and beckon it to waken.
Without a doubt her regal view
Shall continue to bring the sunrise, eternally,
For a night without her is all the sun can endure.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-11-12 19:04:51]
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:01:07 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty, dedication to the one you luv.
Awesome/
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 01:54:07 AM AEST
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I agree with Emy what a beautiful masterpiece
And mountains will surely peak with glee,
For now the hills are able to
Cast an eye upon her beauty grand,
And for a moment not be gazed upon…
For again, she has stolen the show
how awsome is that
great job Wiz |
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 11:04:35 PM AEST
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Wiz~
It's so wonderful how your beautiful words warm up ones heart my dear friend. I find that what ever your subject you pen the most outstanding writes every single time. Your work has such depth to it. I am always taken in by what you write my dear friend.
I wished your writes were always happy ones dearest Wiz~
Take care
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:27:02 AM AEST
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No pleasentries here, only truth:
brilliant metaphors bro~
One can only wonder, who this single girl might be...
Great post~
B |
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 06:57:03 PM AEST
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Your usual beautiful imagery and mastery of thought. I miss readin' all you masters like I used to be able to do. I just caught me a masterpiece in this one though.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Waking Beauty
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 01:13:05 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the trip taken here...
in~n~out of beauty, both taunted by & realized...again & again w/ each awakening
Great job!!!
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