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Didn't say no tell after

Contributed by tears_of_blood on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You left with out saying goodby
you walked in the room sad and drunk
you left noone said no
we tried to keep up but your to far gone
I went back home and heard
the sirens coming from far away
the phone rang to ask if I know where you are
no was the answer I gave
with a sick sad felling in my head
I ran to the car a drove
when I got near I seen with tears in my eyes
then I was told you didn’t make it
I hugged a friend and then fall to my hands to ask why
you where just there with me how could this be
why didn’t we say don’t leave
you left on a bad note but the *****y part is you left
I remember that day I didn’t say stop just don’t go
just a kid at 22 new truck and new dreams
gone before you got to live.

Sweet dreams SAM WILSON
well remember
1984-2005

Copyright Â© tears_of_blood ... [ 2006-11-12 18:58:55]
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Re: Didn't say no tell after (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:12:01 PM AEST
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Very heart wrenching but incredibley written.
hang tuff.
huggs, prayer,
emy

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