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Your Eyes
Contributed by
MandiLee
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 04:30:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Come sit by me and let me see
Into your dark eyes,
See the evil inside of you.
Tearing you down piece by piece,
wearing you down to
The mire bone of the real you.
The real you that you
Forbid the people around you
To see.
The real you is dangerous
and wonderful.
Why don't you let me know now
That the secret is out.
I see the building of lies in you.
Your eyes dart from side to side
Unsure of what's to come of
Your Life
Of shame, lies, and the end.
Come sit beside me and let me see
Into your dark eyes.
Come sit beside me and let me see
Into your dark eyes.
That keep attracting me to
Know you and your weaknesses.
I want to know the real you
That you keep hiding from.
Just how could this happen?
I let you slip so far away.
Copyright ©
MandiLee
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2006-11-12 16:30:53]
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Re: Your Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 05:25:28 PM AEST
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Hhhhmmm....very nice write. You prove that the eyes are the window to ones soul. And from the words and imagery, its like you are looking into their eyes and peering into their soul.
Good work!
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Re: Your Eyes
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by angelfreak on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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| Great write. Would love to hear it as a song. |
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