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the demon is an outcast
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you see me in the dark corner, not wanting me to be the mourner, of who i am
the shade covers me, stinging you like a bee, a nawn hunger for truth and proof, of who i shall be
they are staring, and you're caring seemingly cancels their overbearing hatred of me
like a shunning from demons they aren't very cunning, they seem to see the darkness in me, they only notice my lotus
my eyes are filled with tears of fears, i do not show, like a mere soul unclear but always here
they say i can't win that i can't finish this, they are wrong i shall squish them and their childishness
they can't win i shall destroy them and their joys, this a stick up, so don't screw up
you're doom is near, unclear, but your fear is here so adhere or suffer my drear as we fakir
~The Raven
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Re: the demon is an outcast
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:19:48 PM AEST
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Very strong, thought provoking write!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: the demon is an outcast
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:50:29 PM AEST
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The first half:
Dark aesthetics, smoky-rich environments.
This appeals to me greatly...
Multifaceted and carefully arranged.
I adore the details projected, here.
Gentle and dark...
The second half, although, loses me a little....it seems to differ in meaning from the first 4 lines...
Maybe this is intentional.
Regardless, interesting work. |
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Re: the demon is an outcast
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by tearstained_soul on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 12:37:02 AM AEST
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beautiful in a dark, meniscing (cant spell, srry) sort of way.
favorite quote - "like a shunning from demons they aren't very cunning, they seem to see the darkness in me, they only notice my lotus
my eyes are filled with tears of fears, i do not show, like a mere soul unclear but always here
they say i can't win that i can't finish this, they are wrong i shall squish them and their childishness. " keep up the good work :) |
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