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Truth
Contributed by
Exodus
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 12:24:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I seem to hope
Therefore I dare to dream
I hope things get much better
Or at least better than they seem
In the face
Comes the drink
Into my storm
I begin to sink
See you tomorrow
I'll see you again
I feel so sorry
Physically and rationally, I'm lying to you, my friend
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Exodus
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2006-11-12 00:24:53]
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Re: Truth
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by twick on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:20:05 AM AEST
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| I really think I loved this. Short but powerful. |
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Re: Truth
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 03:49:38 AM AEST
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beautifully written.
fav. stanza- "i seem to hope, therefore i dare to dream, i hope things get much better, or at least better than they seem." keep up the good work, although your good poetry comes from a dark place.... so maybe it'd b better if you DIDNT... lol i confuse MYSLEF sometimes *giggles* well, PEACE OUT homez, keep rockin my sox! |
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