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confused cutter
Contributed by
tearstained_soul
on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:02:40 PM in AEST
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Do I or dont I
sink this blad into my skin?
Do I or don't I
begain the pain again?
Should I or shouldn't I
ignore the objection inside?
Sould I or shouldn't I
cut so deep I cry?
Can I or can't I
deal with the pain I feel?
Can I or can't I
let my soul and body heal?
Will I or won't I
cut to deep one day?
Will I or won't I
use this blade to dig my grave?
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2006-11-11 22:02:40]
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Re: confused cutter
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by blindchoice on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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| i loved it. i can really relate to it. really. and i can underestand your confusion. ive felt it too. keep it up. leme know what you think of mine! |
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Re: confused cutter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:44:51 PM AEST
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its deep...and if you are really in this situation..dont do it!!! you are too cool to die..i mean you did comment my poem and i thank you for that!
depressing..but that is what the feeling of the poem is so very good at expressing your feelings...maybe write a happier poem for your next piece!!
peace dude!
ashley |
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Re: confused cutter
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:15:19 AM AEST
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this is really good!
i self-harm too and understand completely where you're comming from.
the last stanza really got me. i guess it's what all us cutters fear the most when it comes to cutting to just find a simple release.
you always fear you'll kill your-self doing it one day but never think it will happen to you... good write!
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Re: confused cutter
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by twick on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 12:46:51 PM AEST
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I thought this was simply good. Your heart was definitely in every line.
I hate when people do this but I can't help it this time. I have a poem Braille you might want to check out. I wrote it for one of my friends that is going through something similar. |
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Re: confused cutter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 02:34:38 PM AEST
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| I ask the very same questions often. Very good poem! |
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