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The Unattainable Never Looked So Good
Contributed by
trueecho
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Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 08:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I adore you with a stare
A look becomes a smile on your lips
Bright red, lick them shiny
My wish remains the same
Detached yet at one
Blink only once
My filter is too debase
But I resolve, and the chase begins
She just has to say its ok
It is you that see the fire in my eyes
The Unattainable never looked so good
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trueecho
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2006-11-11 20:03:00]
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Re: The Unattainable Never Looked So Good
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:25:01 AM AEST
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Very nice message... Short and to the point...
Good work... keep em coming...
Bill
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Re: The Unattainable Never Looked So Good
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by gracey on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:24:41 AM AEST
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| I have never had anyone write me a poem before...it is beautiful Thank You! You are a very special friend |
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Re: The Unattainable Never Looked So Good
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:38:06 PM AEST
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| Nice piece enjoyed..thanks |
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