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This sidelong aversive glare
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 07:36:58 PM in AEST
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Fantasy of reality this sidelong aversive glare
dangling our hopes on a string careless obstructive tear
Wondering past fantasy reaching past normal views
looking at us threw broken patterns and stale old news
whistling a pointless tune sidestepping all the while
seeing this point of return in a wayward mile
blind and small i make the fall in hopes of finding faith
in regret i made a wrong step and fell into this waste
feeling weak fantasy takes me back to a gentler time
feeling i have escaped something guilty of this time
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Re: This sidelong aversive glare
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by Bryciepoo on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 07:49:23 PM AEST
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| That is one of the best poems i have read. It also reminds me of something I had to go through. |
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Re: This sidelong aversive glare
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:14:52 PM AEST
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Wow Relic, some really good lines in here, man. The opening was fantastic. Hope all is well. Peace, my friend.
Laura |
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Re: This sidelong aversive glare
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by SilhoueX on
Friday, 3rd July 2009 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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| Powerful words my friend. Your words are strong yet humble. I give it an 8 of 10 |
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