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True-Love
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 02:35:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tomorrow will be another day we been together,
revealing my emotions simply in a letter,
understanding after all these years what love finally means,
everytime you say you love me it makes me fall to my knees,
~
Looks of an angel-born straight in heaven,
opened my heart-God finally answered my questions,
vulnerable at anytime to do anything thats said,
everytime I see you you-you fulfill my passion....
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dvsnme816
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2006-11-11 14:35:25]
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Re: True-Love
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by suupjordan on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 06:30:08 PM AEST
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| very deep write, great expression i enjoyed it |
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Re: True-Love
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by trini on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:53:58 PM AEST
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not bad. the hidden message was creative. good job
keep up the good work
-trini |
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