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Diamond Smile
Contributed by
wizard
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Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 11:12:17 PM in AEST
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Eyes which brighten a million nights
A simple gaze, and my soul ignites.
Your voice evokes the ocean’s dance
Each crashing wave caught in your trance.
A touch to cause a fragile heart
To skip a beat, and dreams to start.
Your face emits its goddess glow,
And warms the sun while it gently flows.
A diamond smile framed by your tender lips;
The sight of which my eye so grips.
Thoughts that stroll through every dream,
Across the night your beauty beams.
A woman for whom great poems are penned
A muse whose beauty shall never end.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-11-10 23:12:17]
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 08:13:42 AM AEST
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| I think I met her once. It still pains me |
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 09:58:58 AM AEST
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Breath taking write, beautiful flow and images.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:15:20 AM AEST
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Awesome couplet bro-
great sonnet.. your simplicity is best~
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 10:43:38 PM AEST
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This is one of my favourite poems by you dearest Paul~ I love it~ The imagery cast simply breath taking. The rhyme and flow are sensational. I can't even point out my fav. stanza cos its so very well written. Simply perfect. A most precious, romantic and heart warming write brought to life from the magic of your pen. You are a very talented and gifted poet dearest Wiz~ Shine on my dear friend~
much love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 05:25:49 PM AEST
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If I was the subject of this post, and the right gender, in your space of reality I ask you to marry me! A piece of art equal to Keats or Browning!
wabl
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Re: Diamond Smile
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by Loriann on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:02:40 PM AEST
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this poem is so beautiful. I love reading it. Thank you for sharing this one with me.
xxxoooo
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