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Scar
Contributed by
angelfreak
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Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 10:15:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I have a scar that never properly healed.
It was never stitched in even rows, as it should have.
It was left to close on its own.
The scar always hurt every time I heard your name.
The scar always caused me pain at beautiful sunsets or sights of the ocean.
Memories of you and me made tiny droplets of blood leak from the wound.
Now the scar has ripped back open and it hurts like hell.
It is bleeding, I am crying, It hurts so bad I think I’m dying.
Every ounce of me is pouring back out,
Once again sharing parts of my life with you.
My heart is breaking remembering all we went through.
I opened the scar with hopes that this time it will be fixed.
Can I finally heal the pain, can the wound be stitched.
Can I finally get closure to this deep and painful wound?
Can we finally seal it up for good?
Will I ever stop loving you?
No, I don’t think I could.
Copyright ©
angelfreak
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2006-11-10 22:15:16]
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Re: Scar
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 12:21:51 AM AEST
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I have so many of them. But gradually, I'm learning to love each scar because whenever I'm able to see them I'm reminded that I'm still capable of loving after each heartache, and that's what gets me through.
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Re: Scar
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 02:29:24 PM AEST
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I agree w/ Marisa...& to," stop loving", as you put it, only allows the wound to fester...while the ability to go on & love again, allows the wound to in time mend.Good write:}
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Scar
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 05:32:34 PM AEST
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scars...beautiful things to write about. especially when you can make an emotional scar mroe real then a physical one. i love it- BEAUTIFULLY written.
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