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In Times of Struggle
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 06:28:15 AM in AEST
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Then I thought what dreams I had
That made me feel so terribly bad
I shuddered as thoughts captured me
Blindly thinking where should I be
A glimpse of joy in my sight
Used to last me all the night
Now the need to bask in light
A glimpse of joy no longer right
The empty feeling in my heart
Will come as the day does start
Memory of hope just a hint
Like a spark from stone of flint
Gone the rock for my fire
I search the sky ever so higher
Only to see blue scattered with white
In my search to find true light
The rains then came to wash the smell
Sodden wet I began to dwell
Thank you God from you I see
I am the person I need to be.
24 May 2006
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Re: In Times of Struggle
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by purplestary on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 07:03:17 AM AEST
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this is a wonderful write...i especially love the end.. "The rains then came to wash the smell
Sodden wet I began to dwell
Thank you God from you I see
I am the person I need to be."
it is an amazing feeling when we can finally see that we are the people we need to be....thanks for the brilliant write. keep it up. ;)
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Re: In Times of Struggle
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by Davinah on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 08:54:22 AM AEST
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Very nice
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Re: In Times of Struggle
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 08:12:01 PM AEST
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The rains then came to wash the smell
Sodden wet I began to dwell
Thank you God from you I see
I am the person I need to be.
Your writing has very deep-n-life changing quality's.
In other words when your pen walks it talks.
big smiles,
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