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Black Ice
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 11:03:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Never saw the black ice, as I skid off life's road
Got blinded by the sunshine, now I have this heavy load
A burden on my soul, and a scar upon the heart
Because the sunshine gave me warmth, I tore my love apart
Crawling from the wreckage, but surrounded without light
Heart is bleeding, trust is damaged, on this hellish night
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darkscorpio
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2006-11-09 23:03:14]
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Re: Black Ice
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by blindchoice on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:34:48 PM AEST
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| I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Black Ice
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by NDean on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 12:48:00 PM AEST
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So well written and its length adds to its meaning.
COOL
Nathan |
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