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Waiting
Contributed by
greenbird
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Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 09:42:08 PM in AEST
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When is the gift the greatest?
When is she the most beautiful?
What brings the most out of me in the end, yet almost kills me during the rising?
The waiting for her.
I have been told that the thought is the greater of the two, waiting and fufilling, but no.
There is no greater gift than her love, and it shall channel through my like a wild current.
The river of her will find its way through me, and all shall not be peaceful, but always moving to greater and more prospering bodys of water, just like every river.
So is the road of our lives: forever loving, never knowing, and always using our lack of insight as a pillow to fall back upon when we fail.
But promise me, my love, that if I wait my time for you, that you will wait your time for me. For if I find the end of the road, I will find you on twisted ankles and fallen spirits, and carry you home.
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Re: Waiting
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by books_4gal on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:37:51 PM AEST
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| Ah, yes the wait. Know and welcome it even. The best things are always worth the wait. Thanks for reminder!! |
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Re: Waiting
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:53:37 PM AEST
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| great thoughts, i really like it......... but it's not really a poem. other than that, it's awesome |
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Re: Waiting
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 08:46:03 AM AEST
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Nice and a sweet write...Very good read.
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:06:44 PM AEST
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aww! you care enough about this girl to wait for her! know what that's like, cept mine is with a guy..hate waiting, but there is nothing else i can do!
good write!
thanx also for comment on my poem!
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Re: Waiting
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by SkySong on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 02:53:12 AM AEST
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| Ah, a very well-written poem, raw in its emotion, but beautiful in its execution. It's obvious what you are feeling, because of how well you portray such feelings of that pain of waiting. |
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