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Brokenheart Cemetery
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The fog hangs low, as it dampens my soul,
Tears of pain fall like rain,
As the hounds of hell, naw on church bells,
A marriage that failed, and love set sail,
Welcome to my memories of the brokenheart cemetery,
Before me lies, the hearts that have died,
The river of tears, the sky of wasted years,
The clouds of shame, and the tombstones with names,
The smell of decay, as love withers away,
I walk among the lost souls, in search of love that grows,
I talk with the residents, their pain is so
evident,
Echos of their mornful calls, rattle these silent halls,
I control my emotions as I approach the blood red ocean,
More pain is injected, as another takes their life because of rejection,
I reach the wall of blame, it almost drives me insane,
There's the house of broken will, this is where the souls are sealed,
We've all had our turn, some are just faster to return,
Many buy a home, and spend eternity alone,
I myself took a peak, then I found what I seek,
These are my memories of the brokenheart cemetery.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2003-02-17 08:00:00]
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 10:29:49 AM AEST
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| hi i like your writing...this one is very good... |
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:53:24 AM AEST
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| very deep pain in this brillant write, take care over there, my prayers are said for all our soldiers, well done, |
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by Gin on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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I felt like I was in this poem...I could see everything you wrote...this is truly a great write with very clear descriptive detail...
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:57:35 PM AEST
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| beautiful................. |
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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Matt, this is lovely..very vivid imagery!!
Jenni |
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Re: Brokenheart Cemetery
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:11:57 AM AEST
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| this poem is absolutely breathtaking... i love the imagery, the use of words and everything about it... a precious, albeit sad, write... thank you for this excellent poem... |
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