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Domesticated
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:09:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Gone are the days
Of your wild care-free ways
And the freedoms that you used to know
The next time someone asks
"Bout a big weekend bash
You’ll just have to smile, then tell them no
You’re no longer alone
You’ve got someone at home
And you know for certain she cares
It’s not that you’re whipped
She just will throw a fit
If she wakes to find you are not there
Last week you came back
Discovering that
Your living room was all a mess
And the sheets on your bed
Had been torn to shreds
While the shoes in the toilet, your best
Your mail had been torn
Broken plates on the floor
You had only yourself then to blame
And you couldn’t get mad
Cuz you just had to have
That cute little cuddly ... Great Dane
~ Nazmythian ~
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Re: Domesticated
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:13:41 AM AEST
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LOL
this I enjoyed.
You always manage
a twist at the end.
Your great!!!!
Loved the entire poem,
as I always do.
One day I hope
to write as well as you
my friend....
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Domesticated
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 05:17:18 AM AEST
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| Boy does your poem ring true. My friend Has a great dane and let me tell you her house now is a disaster.There is nothing left that dog destroy everything, and don't get me started on the drool issue....lol but she is adorable. Love your poem, great job. |
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Re: Domesticated
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 07:04:02 AM AEST
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Oh Sheesh, my 10month old setter is just the same...He loves to sleep on my lap!!
Gosh can I relate to this!!!! |
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Re: Domesticated
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 02:06:57 PM AEST
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Love it on many levels, but the, "Teehees" & warm fuzzys take the day!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe |
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Re: Domesticated
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 11:50:49 AM AEST
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A very funny intelligent write Scott! You had me going, and then you got me. Honestly this is completely publish worthy. This is one form writing where I possess little to no skill and that is in humor. I admire someone who can do it so superbly!
Great Job!
SCM |
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Re: Domesticated
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:12:36 AM AEST
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awesome write!
wiz |
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Re: Domesticated
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:33:27 PM AEST
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Oh my, lol, Scott what a twist at the end.
I gotta hand it to ya, lol. A most enjoyable,
warm and very well penned write that
entertains the reader from beginning
to end. Your verstaility in writing shows
how really gifted and talented you really
are~ Keep up the magnificent work my
friend.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Domesticated
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by needledancing on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 12:03:52 AM AEST
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| Priceless....what a great well delivered twist. thanks |
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