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Hell
Contributed by
kaleidoscope
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Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 05:21:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Eyes are watching
They are wanting.
Waiting, waiting.
Red glares stare.
Hunger and hate.
Voices screaming,
Torment and torture.
It’s silent, so quiet.
Deafening silence.
Ice cold hands shake.
Tremble, Tremble.
Alone there’s nothing.
No beginning, no end.
No up nor down.
There is no ground.
Darker than night
Or is it blinding red light?
The flesh burning
You feel them haunting.
Breathing burning breath.
Together collided
Alone... yet a presence
Ice and flames.
Voices start to whisper
No.. more like snicker.
Shall we let you burn?
Shall you turn to ice and stone?
Shall we stay and be your guest.
Or leave you alone never to rest.
Which is worse..which is best.
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kaleidoscope
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2006-11-08 17:21:19]
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Re: Hell
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 05:30:07 PM AEST
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What a dreadful place to be...Nice write..
Blessings
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Re: Hell
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 05:35:00 PM AEST
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sounds more like a nightmare...but you really sucked me in, ya' know, in that kinda way you have to shake off. Well, I'm tremblin'!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Hell
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by Alison on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 03:15:20 AM AEST
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| yup, some people think that their life is wores than hell.....but i dont think thats pos! great write. |
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