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Don’t Laugh At Me
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 04:19:31 PM in AEST
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I dont know what else to say
I dont know what to do anymore
Ive never felt this way before
This is too hard-
I love you way too much to not be loved back
I just don’t know what to do
I tried everything I could think of
So I left you alone
So you could do and be with anything you want
I must admit
You are missed
In every sense of it
Every inch
Everything reminds me of you
Everything stings
Nothing hurts
Relative to everything else
Everyone else
Including myself
I don’t know what more I could accomplish
I can only imagine the bliss
Imagining dreams renders a reality missed
Floating on a swaying stream
Towards a perpetual silent hiss
The sound of your voice
Radiates its emptiness
The longing for your kiss
Leaves me struck
Dead
Motionless
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2006-11-07 16:19:31]
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 04:39:18 PM AEST
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Please don't let the lack of return make you believe that your love is somehow lacking in worthiness.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 04:58:53 PM AEST
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| good read nice poem.. |
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by Sio on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 06:46:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, and something that I can really relate to. The stinging instead of hurting, very true.
And don't worry, it can only get better. |
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by books_4gal on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 09:10:27 PM AEST
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| Concur with the sentiment expressed. Nice read. |
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 05:08:09 AM AEST
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this is not what I've come to expect from you jyss,
as this would make for most dubious rap lyrics at best.. perhaps, love has finally gotten the better of you
..get back to basics.. at least those that helped to forge the work I've come to know and love my friend! ..so long as it is still, the work that drives you-
Sincerely yours.. and as always.. still, your #1 fan~
Billy
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Re: Don’t Laugh At Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:36:18 PM AEST
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I think this expresses much more than people think. I've been in this exact situation....and there truly are no words to express....indeed, motionless.
I think this type of honesty deserves a lot more appreciation...
This is really brave....considering such a fragile disposition.
I particularly enjoyed this:
"Floating on a swaying stream
Towards a perpetual silent hiss"...
Wow....what a fitting analogy!
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