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Silence
Contributed by
LlAnglGrl
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Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 01:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I sit alone in the silence and the never ending darkness of night.
The comforting sound of your loving voice has long since fled my mind.
I try to remeber the silhouette of your kind face, tracing softly with
delicate fingers in the deepest corner of my ever waking mind.
Attempting to speak, I call out your sweet name... silence.
I sream at the top of my lungs hoping that even the slightest sound
will trickle across my quivering lips. Without a sound, a single tear drop
rolls gently off my cheak and splashes violently on the cold, hard ground.
Another tear falls, then a massive flood of tears poor from my aching eyes.
My heart is shattered into a thousand pieces as I lay broken on my empty bed.
No one can here me cry softly into my pillow. No one will ever know of the pain
I felt tonight. So I will lie here, alone forever more, and cry, in the bitter silence
of my shattered being, a cry for none to hear.
Copyright ©
LlAnglGrl
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2006-11-07 13:55:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticHybrid on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:37:22 PM AEST (User
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Very well written. You made your loneliness felt. A very powerful write. |
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by EddieDean on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 03:19:57 PM AEST (User
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Oh man, I feel your sadness, my heart goes out to you. Lonlieness is never a good place to be, alone in your pain and heart-ache. I live my life in lonlieness, its hard, but its the only way I feel safe.
Don't let it get you down, keep fighting, soon the silence will end and you will be happy again.
Eddie Dean |
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST (User
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Your sadness is felt...Hope you will feel better soon...
Lovely write...
Blessings...
honey56 |
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