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I killed Me
Contributed by
Keila
on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 07:39:06 AM in AEST
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I think I saw me die today
Alone in the fire she died
With that old look in her eye
I put her there and there she will stay
Because I made her go away
Killed the memories and the past
gone
I am not the me I used to be
I am no longer an angry fire
I am cold healing water
I am no longer emotionless
I can feel now.
She is dead
ash from a fire long since gone
drowned in the river of my soul
empty filled with love
hate smothered by happiness
loneliness replaced by him
I am happy
I am free
in love
I am not the old you
I am the new me.
Copyright ©
Keila
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2006-11-07 07:39:06]
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Re: I killed Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:28:03 PM AEST
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Nicely contrasted.
Simple on the surface and yet with depth. |
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Re: I killed Me
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 09:14:23 PM AEST
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great write, and that's awesome that happened to you.
--talli |
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