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When I'm Without You, She Strikes
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 01:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Seeing the moon tonight
I see the silver light
Of love
Catching us together
Grasping us tight
But when I'm without you
Luna strikes her silver light
Right through my heart
Just to proove
I can't survive without you
How bad could it hurt?
You wonder
Its such a shame
I don't think you know what its like
Walking out onto
These double yellow lines
As cars fly by
Waiting for those head lights
Dressed in a fashion
That feeds in with the
Unconsistancies of my moods
Its times like these
That silence means everything
Standing here
Letting the rain poor
Stairing up at Luna
With cars passing by
She strikes her silver light
One last time
Just to proove
I can't survive
Without you
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
... [
2006-11-07 01:31:11]
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Re: When I'm Without You, She Strikes
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 03:01:10 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write, my dear friend, Jesse.
It's so amazing how the moon and stars bring out the romance in a person
Luv ya girl, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: When I'm Without You, She Strikes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 08:23:41 AM AEST
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This was a good poem.. I liked the way that you wrote it... It was a very beautiful poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: When I'm Without You, She Strikes
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 04:13:21 PM AEST
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Excellent post...Very good..
honey56 |
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Re: When I'm Without You, She Strikes
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:05:58 AM AEST
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incredibly beautiful write
I LOVE it !!!!
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc
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Re: When I'm Without You, She Strikes
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by TheLostPuppet on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 06:18:16 PM AEST
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| excelent poem |
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