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Vivid Hauntings

Contributed by kayden on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Your smile has kept its picture
Hidden in my mind
Playbacks of the time we had
Tears of joy never sad
A feeling from heart through hands
A symbol for this holy stand
Look into these eyes see the tears that lie
The soul of them for my love

And I will never ever forget
The first time that we met
And these shaking hands

And I will always love you
I’m giving you my ocean blue
I gave it all to you

I lay down cold sheets again
The loving heart has disappeared
I close my eyes and dream of you
Fictitiously these hearts connect
Time with you when the day is dead
And out hearts cry as one
Look at my tears as they take form
The soul of them is my love

I gave it all to you
I gave it all to you
All my love’s with you
All my tear’s with you
I gave it all to you
… … … … … …
Nights do form
A chance to get succor
Contempt for you is forlorn
My heart for you tremors

Thoughts do go on
Possessing my mind violently
As redlined lips make a bridge
Back when my thoughts were mine

A heart can only beat now for so long
Before it starts to bleed for its loved one
And a heart can only bleed for so long

A slowing heart beat means that it’s in need
Then it starts to run and it starts to plead
Give her back to me

Say I love you
Please breath
Please breath

I’ll never forget
I’ll always love you

Copyright Â© kayden ... [ 2006-11-06 21:39:11]
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Re: Vivid Hauntings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:53:58 PM AEST
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I feel each heartbeat and each sullen tear that falls. You captured great emotion throughout this write. Hold onto that love.

~Michelle~

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