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Just Like You
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I see you weakened,
Downtrodden, hanging by a thread,
And all I want to do is break you,
Leave you for dead.
I see you struggle,
You are longing for escape,
You'll do anything to make me go away,
But it's too late.
You ruined my days,
Burned down my feeble walls,
And now I'm coming after you,
With merciless brutality and all.
They told you to stop,
Don't push me over the edge.
Now I bet you wish
You had listened to what they said.
This is what you wanted anyway, right?
To breed a monster that won't forgive,
One that would make you question
Why you ever dared to live.
Leave the child to cry in the corner,
Don't have a second go while they're down,
Or else their cries of revenge
Will knock from your head your tear-stained crown.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2006-11-06 21:12:50]
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Re: Just Like You
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by Kayden on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:21:03 PM AEST
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Awesome, i like this write a lot... I love the imagry in the last stanza "Or else their cries of revenge
Will knock from your head your tear-stained crown" Kiip it up... |
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Re: Just Like You
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:29:51 PM AEST
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Deeply moving to the extent that I can feel the, "Mom" in me welling up with the want to comfort.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Just Like You
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by silver_crested_shadow on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:23:18 PM AEST
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| ha i like this a lot, i think it's laid out and well written to my darker tasts keep it up |
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Re: Just Like You
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:00:26 AM AEST
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This is an amazing poem! I like it a lot... keep it up! :p
luvs ya
.::Jess::. |
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