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Beyond Heaven and Hell
Contributed by
the_wampum_pimp
on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:05:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The muses whisper in my head,
Composing wretched songs,
And forced to write the things they've said,
To them my soul belongs.
Angels whisper in my ear,
"Even the immortal die"
And far surpass my deepest fear,
This, my demise to verify.
Demons crawl within my mind,
Their curses to inscribe,
These curses with my blood, combined,
My words cannot describe.
A battleground for things beyond,
I wish for all to cease,
My thoughts of death are growing fond,
For all I want is peace.
Still my death shall not arrive,
They say `tis not my time,
So through this pain I stay alive,
A vessel for the muse's rhyme.
Copyright ©
the_wampum_pimp
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2006-11-06 09:05:59]
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Re: Beyond Heaven and Hell
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by flamingblade on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:56:10 AM AEST
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very dark indeed
i like it very much, it's
got a lot of nicely described images
good job
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Re: Beyond Heaven and Hell
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by kalbime_aldin on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:59:17 AM AEST
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| nice i really like it and i know how you feel nikki |
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Re: Beyond Heaven and Hell
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:10:00 PM AEST
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Dark and forboding. I do like it.
Michelle |
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