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Manic Space
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 08:59:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i stare into space until there is no more room..
get myself lost to the point of no return..
i search for the exit, it is beyond my grasp..
for now..
life is a cycle..
growth pain and love..
depending on your contemplations and chemistry..
the path will vary vastly..
my life sometimes feels cut short..
manic dreams and blurring streams of light.
its the harmonious melodies..
the crackling voices..
try and add it all up..
to become stable enough to say hello..
shaky hands just wont stop shaking..
brain wont cease to race..
life is a cycle for the lucky..
despair hope and fate..
i sit and contemplate all day long..
and try to correct all that i have wronged..
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2006-11-05 20:59:13]
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Re: Manic Space
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:44:26 PM AEST
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Very well written poem... I liked the flow and to me this was powerful and deep... I thought that it was a great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Manic Space
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by Larien on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 10:24:15 AM AEST
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| I know exactly what that feels like. I liked the description and adjectives. Continue writing! |
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