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Go To Sleep
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 05:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Go to sleep young girl,
I have heard your request.
I am here to end your life.
You called out to Me,
You wanted to no longer Be.
You have the the pills in your Hand,
Take them,
And I will take you away from this Land.
Life is too hard to Bear,
Too much pain Everywhere,
That is what you Say,
So Im here to take the Pain Away.
Close your eyes Girl,
Go to Sleep,
Your loved ones will Weep.
Go to Sleep,
I came to ease your Pains,
I am here to help you find Peace.
So Go to Sleep young Girl,
I am here to End Your Life.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-11-05 17:27:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Go To Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST (User
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Haunting write, spine chilling. I could see it all unfolding.
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Re: Go To Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 10:26:38 PM AEST (User
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lol. wow. i just wrote something basically asking for the person that you described using "I". fantastic write. dark. loved it.
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Re: Go To Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticHybrid on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:17:10 PM AEST (User
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Definitely a new style for you, but it is done really well. You painted the pictures so well. Keep up the good work. It's people like you that make me try to write at that level. |
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