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Don't do it
Contributed by
Ashleigh4
on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don't do it! they tell you, yet give you no reason,
Just be happy, smile, don't notice this prison.
Don't do it, we love you, we want you to live
we ignore and reject you-but we will still grieve.
Don't do it-dont love her, don't cry when she's gone-
her decision to leave was naiive and wrong.
Don't cry for her, scream, or make an excuse-
the reason she's gone is cos of your abuse.
Don't do it-don't comfort her, and stifle her cries,
It's people like you, who make her want to die.
So when it's cold in her bedroom, and her memory makes you cry-
Don't do it-just sit there, and wish her goodbye.
Copyright ©
Ashleigh4
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2003-02-16 23:00:00]
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Re: Don't do it
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by nay on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 03:29:05 AM AEST
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| this is a short poem but it says a lot |
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Re: Don't do it
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:35:05 AM AEST
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| this is so sad...and so true...well done...beautiful... |
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Re: Don't do it
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:25:13 AM AEST
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| great write, sad but true. never be afraid to write or say the truth. |
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Re: Don't do it
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by RockinRose on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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| love it |
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Re: Don't do it
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 01:15:05 AM AEST
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Another great poem by u. I liked it and its so sad what makes it sad is that its so true. Keep on writing. I'll e-mail u soon!
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Don't do it
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by M on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:19:05 AM AEST
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| Ashleigh, this is such a sad poem, it 'works' really well, u should be pleased with it. Its made me cry, and i don't often cry. |
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