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love...does it really exist??
Contributed by
mastersr16
on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 12:53:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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love is a fateful feeling
when one loves everything seems dead
everything except that one person
that one person that does nothing wrong just right
dont let go, hold tight to the one that you love
if you dont someone else will
love for today not for tomarrow
live to love, love to live
the best advice anyone could ever give
if you love you will find the one you are waiting for
the one that will make your world go from
dark
to
light
in the blink of an eye
the one person that is the beacon of hope
in a sea of dispare
when you love you live, when you hate you die
every time you hate you die a little more
everytime you love you grow
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mastersr16
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2006-11-05 00:53:38]
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Re: love...does it really exist??
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 07:34:52 AM AEST
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you could've used a few more "colorful" words...and you used "love" a lot...but oh well, your point comes across strong, and it was beautiful. i loved it.
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Re: love...does it really exist??
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 09:11:04 AM AEST
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i agree w/ alien w/o a name....you could spice it a little, but i loved this part...
the one that will make your world go from dark to light in the blink of an eye the one person that is the beacon of hope in a sea of dispare
it's beautiful, i like how you capture the feelings of love into something all of us can relate to...overall good wirte |
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