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Behind The Madness
Contributed by
David-S
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 08:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hate the things you do to me,
I love the way it used to be.
I know you may have cried
Every time I swallowed my pride.
I brought out all the truth
About my whole troubled youth.
I wish things could go smooth
Like I knew every move.
We all know that its true
That you enjoy what you do.
You gave me all this pain,
Now I try to cover it in vain.
Since I cant live in the past
I might as well stick with my mask.
Ill be the person you want to know,
As long is all this anger doesnt show.
Copyright ©
David-S
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2006-11-04 20:15:35]
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Re: Behind The Madness
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
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Oh David, this is so heart-wrenchingly painful ..
The last four lines completely sealed the sentiment.
They are tremendously powerful.
This is filled with an exacting torment that I'm sure many
are akin to. The loneliness is obvious, as is the broken
heart ..
very well written and emotive.
~Breezy |
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Re: Behind The Madness
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:16:28 PM AEST
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I agree with brezy.
hang tuff. You gotta be yourself.
Sadness endureth a moment but joy last till morning.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Behind The Madness
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:27:59 AM AEST
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yes i agree with Breezy on this
good write |
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