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Cocaine
Contributed by
rickshaw
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:27:55 PM in AEST
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I love it, I hate it,
I dont mind it.
Go on so
Give me a bit.
A teenage country
This is our zit,
Come on baby,
Just squeeze it.
You buy it, you chop it
Put it up you nose.
Then turn it up
At all of those
Who dont need
it to talk in prose
the gap begins
and it grows and grows
You toss, you turn
your not much fun.
Sunday morning
you block out the sun.
Is it worth it?
Can you even say
You live for the night
and die every day.
Copyright ©
rickshaw
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2006-11-04 13:27:55]
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Re: Cocaine
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:40:14 PM AEST
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I understand this all too well & after too many years I know the answer for me was,"NO!" it was not worth it. Hope you don't waste as many years as I. Not waggin' my finger at you in true "born again" fashion...just understanding.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe
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Re: Cocaine
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by RickShaw on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:49:54 PM AEST
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| Thanks- the poem is written about my girlfriend though! I realise its not clear though. |
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Re: Cocaine
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by richcol7522 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 02:11:39 PM AEST
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Hopefully your girlfriend comes to realize all the things she has to lose by continuing to go down the path that she has chosen. Nicely written poem though.
Rich |
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Re: Cocaine
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 04:46:22 PM AEST
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Nice piece...Your choice,her choice..Stay drug free!
Help her to end this habit!
honey56 |
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Re: Cocaine
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:56:46 PM AEST
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| love the last stanza the best. especially the last 2 lines "you live for the night and die every day"....thats nice.. |
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Re: Cocaine
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:56:48 PM AEST
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| love the last stanza the best. especially the last 2 lines "you live for the night and die every day"....thats nice.. |
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Re: Cocaine
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by laydeeluck on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 01:56:45 PM AEST
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| cocaine is definetly the thief of all sun rises...........it took me by surprise and held me tight until i realized i had a choice to release the grip first...........nice capture |
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