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A body a fee
Contributed by
mindset
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:27:10 PM in AEST
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Eyes drawn over the female sale
Mind gripped lost on what to come
Words of splinters green light fun
Only now have to do
For myself or my children's pun
They only judge and never realise
The pain on what is
And having no loose
Lost guide no tour here
My body his haven
It is the free for now
But yet we just do
See it for what it is
You will never understand
We lead the oldest place
Since the first setting sun
Does that give the rite
To make judgment
But yet here I am aching
Wanting to be free
Expressing all that is not me
Getting close
I think it's so very deep
Have to slow the moment
Or create a mistake
I only do on the need to be better
But they never see
For them
Many of lost words and misconceptions
Judging on what we are not
Only doing a job
Copyright ©
mindset
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2006-11-04 13:27:10]
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Re: A body a fee
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 02:04:22 PM AEST
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| MmmMMmm there are other ways of gettin money instead of selling bodies to other ppl! personally i would never stoop that low.. but well written.. keep posting |
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Re: A body a fee
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 04:49:21 PM AEST
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Nice post....True r Not...Your call...
i'm not here to judge...
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Re: A body a fee
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 04:23:04 AM AEST
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| This is well thought up, yes the oldest profession, and still going on today. Sell your body,well is it that or delivering a service, yes maybe, and there seems to be plenty of willing takers. I would never judge, for we never know the reasons why. Well written and makes you think. Sue x |
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