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My Heart Cries
Contributed by
honey56
on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:38:18 PM in AEST
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My heart cries out with many,
Many tears..
I gave it a ten for it weighted
Me down so slow…
It carry me through the
Trenches..
Blackness and the gray…
None of which that love me,
I know..
My mind spins around in
Turmoil it does..
Leaving me turned up side
Down in such awkward
State..
I could not relate for this
Was not for me..
Although I love the rain
The sunshine was a welcome
Sight…
For I do love the warmth
The sun cast down on me
To warm my aching bones
From the dampness of the
Rain cold chill to
The sun shall cure my heart
From the blackness and the
Gray
All from a depression state
I dare not to linger...
For my heart is a free spirit
That sings of sunflowers
And all the love that feed the
Wild flowers
As they grow into a beautiful
Array of colors...
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2006-11-04 12:38:18]
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Re: My Heart Cries
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:06:58 PM AEST
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i think i've said this a few times to people in my comments, this is very powerful and full of emotion one of these pieces that sounds excellent when read out loud. Great writing.
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Re: My Heart Cries
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 06:10:24 PM AEST
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I know how you feel for I have been through depression myself. It's not all dark my friend. It'll get better. I wish you a rainbow of joy and happiness dearest honey56~ Chin up and may your days ahead be much joyous & bright.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: My Heart Cries
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:57:13 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel, it does get better... brilliant poem. xxx |
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Re: My Heart Cries
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:14:53 PM AEST
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| very heart touchin poem.. brilliantly written.. keep posting... |
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