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I Stand In A Puddle

Contributed by honey56 on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:31:43 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

I stand in a puddle of my own
Tears..
Mixed with sadness and the
Pain..
As I gape upon the open sea
Filled with so many troubles
That rushes into the raging
Sea...
It set the sea on a wayward
Path,as
My tears spills over into the
Sea..
To become part of the watery
Salty bed..
Filled with happiness filled
Pain
Absorbing each tear as part of
Its bed...

I stand in a puddle of my own
Tears..
Living on for decades to tell
The stories of all the lonely
And the broken hearted..
Telling the stories of all the
Happy faces,
That brought joy and love by
The open sea..

I stand in puddle of my own
Tears..
Spilling over into the sea by
The light of the moon..
Looking at our reflection
Shimmering waves on the open
Sea..
Showing life pain raining down
On the open sea…
And the love that rode upon the
Waves..
Saving each and every story from
The broken hearted,lonely and the
Weary...
To the lovers by the moon....
I stand in a puddle of my own
Tears...

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2006-11-04 11:31:43]
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Re: I Stand In A Puddle (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:07:37 PM AEST
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Love the imagery you conjured up with this write. Not to take anything away from this, but I'm quite the easy sell when it comes to the ocean. Thanks for doing our mother ocean justice & remember she will always be there to absorb your tears...of sadness, of joy, of frustration, of love, or anything of great passion you wish to share with her.

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe

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