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A Whisper Away
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I am but a whisper away,
I sing with the Angels every day,
when you see a rainbow I am there,
I am the breeze that blows in your hair,
I see the tears, for me you have cried,
im always here right by your side,
when you feel sad, as my name you speak,
I gently kiss you on the cheek,
I stroke your face, I stroke your tears,
I'll never leave you im always here,
we have been parted just for a while,
if you close your eyes, your see my smile,
for there is one thing I am sure,
your hold me in your arms once more,
your love for me is so strong,
im always here I have not gone..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-11-04 10:02:52]
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:34:44 AM AEST
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I love this piece..
Beautiful,simply beautiful...
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:01:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful work, very well written and the most moving piece I've read for a long time.
J. |
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 06:22:30 PM AEST
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Lilly this is a beautifully ascribed piece of poetry that touches the heart~
I stroke your face, I stroke your tears,
I'll never leave you im always here,
we have been parted just for a while,
if you close your eyes, your see my smile,
These lines brought back memories of my dear beloved friend. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write with us dearest Lilly~
take care
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by silver_crested_shadow on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:51:46 AM AEST
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| Wow, now I’m not to spiritual but I believe I have felt something here by reading this especially the last paragraph, thanks and good job, love it |
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by TwistedCage on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 02:26:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful scribe, and it touches the heart.
Very nicely done...
Love, |
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by LadyStrdust on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 06:19:15 PM AEST
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Ello me dears!
This is nice they all are!
What a collection theyre's loads on here!
I hope your having a good night!
Love you Loads!
Must be seeing you after Christmas!
Candy
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 04:06:20 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write, very touching. I love it. |
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 05:49:55 AM AEST
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what a wonderful heartfelt, Inspirational write
Loved it, made me feel good, I believe in heavenly angels and also a few earthly ones too.
there called Unconditional friends.
hugs from Doug :-)
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 06:49:36 PM AEST
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I have this belief that love is a forever thing and you've just captured it eloquently, Lilly! Great work.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: A Whisper Away
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by feralpen on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 02:08:47 PM AEST
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| A Whisper Away is one of those poems that I'm sure all who read will wish that they had written. This steadfast and eloquent promise is as lovely as a heart can feel. I would not be the least surprised to see this poem again someday... as part of a wonderful collection. Just in case you're wondering... this one's a 'keeper'. Just beautiful Miss Lilly. |
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