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sun...moon...and stars...
Contributed by
mastersr16
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:01:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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when the sun faids and the moon rises from its everlasting sleep, the stars come out to play in the darkness...if you look hard enough you can see them jumping and playing, in the light of the moon...when the moon is full the rays emitted from its surface cause joy and energy to flood through your veins...the sun lights the day and beautifys the evening skys, causing the redness to cover your body like the blood of the fallen...the fallen in battle to keep us free, free from the oppressions, and rules, to keep us like the stars, dancing and playing in the care of the moon, like children dancing and playing in the care of their parents...
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2006-11-04 00:01:42]
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Re: sun...moon...and stars...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:06:53 AM AEST
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This is a beautifull, magic write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: sun...moon...and stars...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:39:51 AM AEST
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A beautifully ascribed piece of poetry. The imagery is so dreamy and sweet. Well done and thanks so much for sharing this with us~
warm hugs,
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Re: sun...moon...and stars...
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:33:29 AM AEST
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Your piece reminds me of the psychadelic poster where the Blue Boy is poking a whole in the fabric of the cosmos. Your capture of the astronomical tapestry is at the heart of the birth of civilization. By looking up dreaming and relating slowly we faded from our animal natures to one more sublime... and that is the word I would use to describe your write adding utterly sublime.
Peace
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