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Running Away 'Til Next Year
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 06:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Even the odds and you'll never fall down
Breaking the ice and you can't hear the sound
It's great seeing double, life times two
Such a graceful, silly sophisticated view
Get in the car and you like to drive fast
Fall in the bar and you never look back
Hold your head and you'll cry in your hands
Stand on the top and make your own plans
The city is dull and my birthday isn't until next year
The ceiling is plain and there's nobody here
Fly through the clouds, catch some wisp in your eye
Drown in oblivion but don't tell a lie
Losing your keys, you step into the sun
You want to escape and you know it would be fun
Breaking a finger, scraping your knee
Humble gestures, I wish you'd bump into me
Caught by a twister, dancing waves of grain
The midwest is beneath me, I'm flying again
Take a picture, take a chance
I'd love it if you'd say yes to a dance
Tank on empty, your hands feel dry
I'd read you a story and not even tell you who its by
Take a look around, make sure you know its me
Grab your silly costume, be whatever you wanna be
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Exodus
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2006-11-03 18:00:57]
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Re: Running Away 'Til Next Year
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by kaleidoscope on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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I loved this! It was simple and real..i especially liked the last lines ....Take a look around, make sure you know its me
Grab your silly costume, be whatever you wanna be...it has a comfort level....good write! thanks for sharing |
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Re: Running Away 'Til Next Year
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by MandiLee on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 07:54:51 PM AEST
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WOW great poem a true beauty...the whole poem is amzing i love the part where it says
"Get in the car and you like to drive fast
Fall in the bar and you never look back"
i think it is great when a poem puts you in a place you remember and wow you put life in words!
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