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wats good

Contributed by hearts4pain on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 02:57:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

The very first night we met
a night i will never forget
My eyes fixed, I couldn't stop staring
Like a little girl, I hope you didn't you notice me drooling
Upside down and full of giggles
With an unaccomplished handstand I felt like a cripple
all starting from the hiccups
I'm now known as the girl who threw up

In only a matter of a week or two
Some stuff went down. none of us had a clue
It might have been the stupidest rumor ever
But screw the clap. I'm J ******* weener

So you've messed up?
What do I care?
We all go through life facing choices
We make mistakes, don't count the losses
I still care about you and think you're a great guy
I wish you knew I believe in you

All I can do it try

So everything is back on track again
time went by too fast
i thought this just began?
And now i have to say goodbye

Dang this sucks and you don't understand why
when you held me i felt like one with you

too early i fell
too late it's gone

all I have are memories left

but just remembering your smile

makes it all worthwhile

writing this poem is the least I can do
I just can't seem to say the words to you
ill never forget the look on ur face when i gave you that sweater
and i thought for a moment you really knew how much you mean to me
i didnt that kiss to end
that feelin i had was all that kept me warm
that feelin i had was what kept me shaking
i never told you how much id miss you

and now its every night i leave you drunken messages
im afraid i told you the truth
and im so anxious to know what you think

i havent heard from you in days
and it makes me sad to think

im going to give up

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2006-11-03 14:57:59]
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Re: wats good (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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NEVER NEVER GIVE UP!!! Especially on a love so strong...You need to tell him the truth..the undrunken truth....in a real conversation..not a phone message...Just because he doesn't love you back now doesnt mean he never will again! Have hope!
I wish you all the best
*ashley*

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