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You Are Here
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 09:51:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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It won’t take a million artists
for it’s been tried
- and you didn’t listen
It won’t take a million scientists
for all their great work
- you steal the entertainment
It won’t be your leaders
for they have their own agenda
- you’re just a number
Nor will it be by me
for I’m just one man
- my voice goes only so far
The world dies around you
yet you won’t miss prime-time
another heart is broken
yet you remember the full ocean
a boy comes with hope
- yet you only hear effort
a heart bleeds in vain
- yet you turn away with disgust
The problem won’t go away
you may as well close your eyes
- on the freeway
either way, things will change
and you’ll be sorry
- that you never took the chance.
1/11/06
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Re: You Are Here
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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i like the way that you've captured all the powerful truth in this!
this-is-brilliant! |
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Re: You Are Here
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 01:51:45 PM AEST
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Very cleverly done!
A well groomed message for all. |
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Re: You Are Here
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by PoeticHybrid on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:19:21 PM AEST
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| Very well written. You have a wonderful way of wording all of your poems to capture the emotions. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: You Are Here
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by Alison on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 05:37:45 PM AEST
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| very well said. you put it all together so greatly! wonderful!!! (oh, and yes, very true) |
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Re: You Are Here
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 09:08:16 PM AEST
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your girl, she just doesnt know what she lost, and my guy, just doesnt know what he's missing..."either way, things will change
and you’ll be sorry
- that you never took the chance."
how true! in all your poems you capture your feelings and its amazing, to be able to do something like that!
:-)
smile! you deserve it!!
ashley |
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Re: You Are Here
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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i just saw the topic you put the poem in...it didnt really strike me as political....but then again i know nothign about politics...more like you are mad at someone than political...sorry if my comments caused confusion!
ashley |
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