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My heart moves its way
Contributed by
girish
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Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 09:48:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Atop the mountain`s peak it has its source
And down the mountain-side it gently flows
In its stride, it takes both highs and lows
And here it makes me stand on my toes
It moves through the air like a gentle breeze
And all the time it does make me freeze
Also my mind, it does tease
And my heart, it really does appease
It`s as sweet as the shade of a giant tree
It is the pinnacle of beauty, I do agree
It sets my heart so free
That I go around this world in a spree
It is as smooth and soothing as a glacier
Of joy, no doubt it`s the frontier
When I am involved, there is no barrier
In a way it is my heart-carrier
And now as it comes to a close
To its author, my heart longingly goes
Such divine music who, else could compose
Lord Krishna, with his flute of course!
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girish
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2006-11-03 09:48:40]
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Re: My heart moves its way
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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Very moving.Right on...write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: My heart moves its way
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by Saloni on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 01:12:33 PM AEST
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| hey girish i like this poem! very passionate.. jai shri kishna.. |
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Re: My heart moves its way
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by Gruber on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 02:49:45 PM AEST
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Great poem it kept me wondering what it was very good descriptives nice flow love it!
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