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A Knight in shining Armour
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 05:41:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A knight in shining armour,is what I really need,
who comes along and rescues me on his trusted steed,
he needn't be king Arther or handsome Lancelot,
just a nice kind guy, who's maybe a bit hot,
He would gently, take me by the hand,
carry me off on his steed, to fantasy land,
I'll be dressed in crinoline and lace,
my hair cascading, around my face.
go to the ball dance all night,
My handsome suiter will hold me tight,
all fairy tales have a happy end,
Think.Im going round the bend...
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lillyjane
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2006-11-03 05:41:06]
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 05:54:46 AM AEST
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Nice one Lillyjane , here is the answer. ha ha
Your knight in shining armour he does exist,
But before you do lots of frogs you must kiss,
And when he arrives you surely will know,
For long held feelings you will then show,
He may not be King arthur or even lancelot,
But you will be heaven in your own camelot,
Your not round the bend, happiness comes free,
But remember when you find him, has he got a friend for me.
Lovely poem. Sue x |
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by onlyoneheart on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 07:00:31 AM AEST
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| this poem is so sweet really .it's simple fantacism .. |
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 02:57:07 PM AEST
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Def a daydream! saying that I'm not so bad lol!
nice write.
J. |
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:05:35 AM AEST
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Oh dearest LillyJane I hope your knight in shining armour shows up real soon and I do hope he has a friend for my friend Sue C.
Here's to a fairytale romance~
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:27:08 PM AEST
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whoa, lilly .. sounds like a dream ! : )
fairy tale or not, this was pointedly moving. Never stop
dreaming, I say. This is what helps bring our hopes and
desires to light and subsequently into our realm of reality ..
soft and charming, hun. A most beguiling write.
~Breezy |
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Re: A Knight in shining Armour
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 06:53:50 PM AEST
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By golly, any guy with any sense and the freedom to pursue should git him a steed and a nice 'n' shiny set of armor. Good (and sweet)work, Lilly.
wabl
KenMoore
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