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Too Sad For A Title
Contributed by
lieinruin
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Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 11:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'd gladly give my life away just to see you smile
Something I haven't seen in a while
I'd slit the worlds throat to hear one more "I love you"
I'd pull down the stars and throw them to different ends
I'll drown in my own worthlessness before I take the time to lose you
So I'll be left with nothing to live or die for
Turn your back and walk away
Lay this lover's heart to rest
I have no reason to be, without you a part of me. . .
Copyright ©
lieinruin
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2006-11-02 23:12:05]
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Re: Too Sad For A Title
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 12:02:04 AM AEST
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Emotionionally draining for such a short poem, despair is expressed deeply here. Like a lot of us, writing helps ease such despair, it's not a cure, but it certainly helps.
Nice one. |
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Re: Too Sad For A Title
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 01:56:24 AM AEST
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this has so much depth and emotion to it, yet you used so few and simple words, a very hard task to accomplish, yet you did it, im lovein it, thank you for the read.
SM |
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Re: Too Sad For A Title
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 05:54:58 AM AEST
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| That so sad I hope everything turns round for you and you here the words you want to hear and see the smile . xxx |
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Re: Too Sad For A Title
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by spider on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 06:19:33 AM AEST
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| really powerful opening lines. as soon as you start to read you feel just....sad, desperate. i dont often feel this affected by words. |
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