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This race
Contributed by
timmewolff
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Destruction,death
it's all i see
Yet people dare ask
What's wrong with me
I can't be happy
I can't smile
Looking at this world
So rotten and vile
People hurt
People cause pain
Sometimes I wonder
How I stay sane
People smile
Put on their fake face
Hey,look around
We're loseing this race
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timmewolff
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2003-02-16 19:00:00]
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Re: This race
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by plous on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:22:58 AM AEST
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| that is great write and so true. |
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Re: This race
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:23:05 AM AEST
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wow. Honestly, I think that this write is amazing. I understand this feeling completely although perhaps in a somewhat different way. I guess we'll never know. Keep up the great writing!
yours Kolbrún |
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