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Broken WIngs
Contributed by
exiled
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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(Broken WIngs)
Is this meant to be...insanity.
Pushing the blade in deeper
taking the safety off
setting yourself free...insanity.
emboldening the thought
that your broken wings can still fly
eradicate all of your dreams
dare to play with me, im your...insanity.
as darkness sorrounds you
and you can't see the blood at your feet
give into me, surrender your thoughts
surrender your dreams
let me take your pain
and set it free.
let me mend your broken wings
surrender unto me...surrender.
Damn you it's not your life
no fear, giving up everything with a shrug
that's what is wrong with me!
Maybe I can't have what i yearn
but I sure as hell am not giving into you!
did you think it would be that easy
you can't defeat me.
you are the cause of much of my pain.
no longer shall i bleed
so that you can feed.
i'm taking everything inside
and pushing you over the brink
it's do or die, my life no longer under you.
**** you, you have cost me to much
take your insanity and leave.
i'm putting an end to my pain and suffering.
starting with you,
and ending with me.
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exiled
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2003-02-16 18:40:00]
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Re: Broken WIngs
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.... This is very deep and dark.... but with strong imagery...
Jenni |
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Re: Broken WIngs
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by sunflower on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:38:00 PM AEST
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| cuts deeply, good stuff |
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Re: Broken WIngs
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 03:55:47 PM AEST
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I liked this exiled very good imagery... very well written. I've felt like that countless times. Keep on posting.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Broken WIngs
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by kristin on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:32:21 PM AEST
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| First of all I dont think that your insane for writing it lol. I can actually relate to everything that you wrote about in this poem, thats the scary part. I know whats its like to feel that hurting myself would be the only way to fix a problem. I liked this very much. I especially liked it when you said "im putting an end to my pain and suffering.starting with you,and ending with me." Its almost like when you lose someone your so dear to you lose a part of yourself as well. Great work. |
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Re: Broken WIngs
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:46:39 PM AEST
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| i love how you wrote this, like a little chat with insanity itself, lol, you've a great mind and i love your poetry:) hugs nessa |
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