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my dying corner
Contributed by
Cyd
on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 11:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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sitting here in my crying corner,
i dont ever want to be like her,
crying here in my corner, i bleed,
all alone, this is what i need,
wallowing in my sorrow,
and i look att he knife i always borrow,
then i put it to my wrist again,
cut deep once more, so she cant win,
bleeding out my sad life,
crying out all my strife,
im sitting here so i cry,
im crying here so i can die.
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Cyd
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2006-11-01 23:09:01]
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Re: my dying corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 11:26:45 PM AEST
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i'm so sorry, i hope things get better for you. its a good write, you showed ur pain well, can relate.
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Re: my dying corner
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 03:06:12 PM AEST
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Depths of such sorrow.
You wrote this and expressed well.
THough I cannot condone suicide and
really hate the idea or thought of it.
Crying and writing is a good release to the hurt that we feel. It is a cleansing to our souls.
I do not understand the cutting and those sort of things but hope that you can find inner peace without resorting to those things.
There is alot of living to do hun, look for a rainbow and you may find it.
hugs
~Michelle~ |
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