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Should I?

Contributed by brittaney on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 06:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Should I take your hand?
Should I keep our space?
Should I make a move?
Should I let you chase?

Should I pull you in?
Should I kiss your lips?
Should Iet you go?
Should I let this slip?

Should I talk to you?
Should I stay quiet?
Should I run with this?
Should I just try it?

Should I take a chance?
Should I not at all?
Should I run and hide?
Should I let this fall?

Should I still love you?
Should I just give up?
Should I try again?
Should I still buildup?

Should I keep going?
Should I feel this way?
Should I be unsure?
Should I know you stay?

Should I let you go?
Should I stop trying?
Should I be confused?
Should I feel like dying?

Copyright © brittaney ... [ 2006-11-01 18:53:26]
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Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:21:33 PM AEST
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Your use of repitition is most lyrical and kinda trippie I think I had a flashback to Floyd...

Very good effort I'd love to hear the music of it in your head.

I also like how one could respond yes or no to each of these questions making a poets case for being positive to each answer.

I say the voice that asked the questions is very sure at getting to the heart of what is a true feeling trust that direction.

Peace
Yang

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